English 92
Fall 2007
Instructor Anna Mills

Final Revision Plan

On a separate sheet of paper, number and type your answers to the following questions.  Attach the grade sheet and final draft with my comments for the essay you plan to revise.  Completion of the Final Revision Plan is a required part of the Final Revision Project.  
1.  Which essay will you revise?  
2.  Why did you choose this essay?
3.  List at least 6 things you will focus on in your revision, including changes to both content and grammar:
4.  What will be the hardest thing to fix?
5. Do you feel it's possible for you to fix all the things I commented on?  What questions do you have about my comments?  Highlight any comment you do not understand on the final draft I graded so I can find it easily.  Then type your questions on the plan.
6.  What strategies will you use to help you with the revision?
7.  Specifically, which on-campus reources will you use? Examples include the Writing Lab, WSP, Reading Tutoring (if my comments suggest you need to show a better understanding of the reading), my office hours, and Cyberia.
8.  Your final revision will need to show your mastery of all the skills we've worked on this semester.  Specifically, your final revision must include 
•	Two counter-arguments with responses
•	6 connecting words and at least 2 contrast/concession subordinators
•	Correct methods of introducing quotations and paraphrases
•	No problems with fragments, run-ons, or subject-verb agreement.  
Depending on which essay you choose to revise, some of these requirements may not show up in my comments or in the essay you originally wrote because we hadn't covered them yet.  Which of the above will you need to add in and correct on your own?
8.  Do you have any questions for me about the assignment?